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For writing we were writing about the Christchurch earthquake and we were writing a recount about our swimming sports this is my Christchurch earthquake story
= = =Christchurch Earthquake=

===After the terrible earthquake in Christchurch in 2010 another big earthquake has hit but this time killing people. The people were not ready for such a big earthquake and it was at lunch time. This earthquake was smaller on the scale but much more devastating because it was closer to the surface 5km when the other was 10km that is like 1/2 more damaging. 65 people have been conformed dead. They weren't that prepared for the earthquake. But now that is it has happened they all need to do something by conserving the water and turning off the electricity other wise a fire could start. They need to produce water so they don’t waste any. They also need people to help out in the doctors and they need blood donations. Around 300 people are still missing. If a earthquake was to hit tomorrow would you be ready? You would need to have lots of water food etc so would you be ready? Destroying everything which will take lots to prepare and having to conserve everything. To repair Christchurch is about 6 billion dollars that is how bad the damage is.===